Doctor Kitty

Fixed. :O Now I'll stop spamming Snoink's post. :D

Well, I'm glad it's pretty obvious that this is a dream. :D I'll get to work on describing the girl more. I met said girl in real life, so I'm ...

I'm not much of a poet, but I will say that the imagery was perfect. Some of it I didn't exactly understand, but a lot of it was brought out ...

I made some suggested changes. That block of dialogue you mentioned regarding the commas-- I've changed it, but hopefully it's not too unspecific the way I rewrote it. And thanks. ...

It made me giggle. Anything squirrel related deserves to be in my siggy. :O

Yarr! Thanks be to ye fer yer input! I made suggested changes, as I agreed with them. :D

I still like this. it r maeking me laff. HOWEVER! This: "*&$@" Smaur said. "What?" Grif asked. Is most certainly not the way someone would talk with marbles in their ...

Argh. Rhyming poetry is harder than I thought. It's kinda difficult thinking of words that both rhyme, flow, and are on "the same level" as the other words. I'll keep ...

Wow.

My body was numb. I was breathing, yet I felt so lifeless. Something inside me would not accept death—would not accept defeat. Something inside me fought. The thirst, the hunger, ...

Thanks for the comments! Much appreciated. Yeah, it's basically my first poem. I'm not really a poet; I just felt like taking a shot at it. :wink:

I don't think it was meant to be critiqued. He just wanted to share. I thought it was CERAYZEE funny lol. Hey, it was here, so I critiqued it. :P ...

Yay! *victory dance* 98% in theology...! WOO! *Waits for his Algebra II score from yesterday...* Today's Spanish and Geography. :P

At least we're done now! >.< Lucky. :P an Algebra II midterm *fear* I'm taking that in about...4 hours... :/

It's not ignorant to ask someone if they will continue a piece of work! (It's a perfectly logical question to ask, in fact :D) :) Once "The Great Hammer of ...